Okay so part of this is “let’s put another sex scene in here” but also it feels like these two are just… so into each other that they’ll find excuses to get intimate and I love that.
The chapters are a bit formulaic in that there is at least one major sex scene in each so I think that’d be a totally valid critique to make. I am glad that it feels natural based on the relationship that Alex and Sara have, but I do think if I went longer with this than the 5 planned chapters I’d need to vary the formula or it would get stale.
Id have to agree that it really feels natural the way things are going right now, but I also see the point in having fewer pancakes scenes as the story grows bigger over time
PS Rose, Im somehow got a feeling we’d find quite some common ground and topics to talk about, feel free to poke me on @SergeyWaytov at Telegram or SergeyWaytov#1163 on Discord
6 thoughts on “Overstay Page 124”
Kyle Wellwood
Best Christmas ever.
Rose Doberman
Love me some dominance fights. <3
pj wolf
Okay so part of this is “let’s put another sex scene in here” but also it feels like these two are just… so into each other that they’ll find excuses to get intimate and I love that.
phrannd
The chapters are a bit formulaic in that there is at least one major sex scene in each so I think that’d be a totally valid critique to make. I am glad that it feels natural based on the relationship that Alex and Sara have, but I do think if I went longer with this than the 5 planned chapters I’d need to vary the formula or it would get stale.
Kyle Wellwood
Still curious about the pregnancy thing.
I still wonder how it works for werewolves.
Sergey Waytov
Id have to agree that it really feels natural the way things are going right now, but I also see the point in having fewer pancakes scenes as the story grows bigger over time
PS Rose, Im somehow got a feeling we’d find quite some common ground and topics to talk about, feel free to poke me on @SergeyWaytov at Telegram or SergeyWaytov#1163 on Discord
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